Category: Books to Read (Page 8 of 14)

I've been sitting on this book, The World of the Ten Thousand Things by Charles Wright, for about 17 years, moving the book from New York to Pennsylvania to California (3x in California alone) to New Mexico (3x there, too). Finally I buckled down to read it and, like many things you put off for so long, you realize you should have read this years ago. But would you have loved the book's ghostly vagueness 17 years ago. Definitely not. So you then realize you've carried this book around so long waiting for the "Wright time" — as it were — to read it.

I'm working on a novel about the ghosts of a dying western town so of course this book's poems about the dead attracted me. Years ago I may have found Wright's poems difficult and distant, too much well-readedness on his sleeve, the type of thing Helen Vendler and Hart Crane would like…and my friend Teresa who loved Hart Crane and Jorie Graham and recommended we go to the poetry reading at the 92nd Street Y in New York City to see Graham and Wright read. This is where I bought the book long before I was ready for it.

Wright gets at that under-layer of nature poems, the almost gothic, elegiac layer of it…without coming across as completely Southern gothic. The books is also full of poems about artists (Cezanne a favorite), incidents of mysterious beauty. His thoughts flow about seemingly unedited. He experiments with variations: variations of self-portrait experiments, variations of journaling (one poem written over a calendar year). There is a lot of religion here: transfiguration, crosses, sin and plenty of nature's surreality and landscapes that undo us, abstractions of the seasons. In this way the book felt like a giant (and I mean giant) haiku.

The poems fly across the page in indents and with parentheticals. There is plenty of high-culture here too: music, painting, wine. He takes lots of car drives, invokes the act of licking a lot.

True, Wright often gets lumped with the language poets and he admits, "Language can do just so much" but there is plenty of aboutness in his poems, plenty of scene, plenty of voice. There's almost a sense of a man in early 50s midlife crisis here.

I've lost touch with Teresa 15 years ago…but I can still hear her reading excerpts of these poems to me.

From "Composition in Grey and Pink"

The souls of the day's dead fly up like birds, big sister,
The sky shutters and casts loose.
And faster than stars the body goes to the earth.

Head hangs like a mist from the trees.
Butterflies pump through the banked fires of later afternoon.
The rose continues its sure rise to the self.

From "A Journal of True Confessions"

The new line will be like the first line,
                                                                            spacial and self-contained,
Firm to the touch
But intimate, carved, as though whispered into the ear.

Likewise I loved Adobe Odes by Pat Mora. I found out about Mora from a book on Southwestern literature and art. These odes are done in the spirit of Pablo Neruda (she even includes an ode to him) but they are fabulously about New Mexican subjects. My favorite ones were odes to adobe, guacamole, kitchens, chiles, chocolate, names, the cricket, tea, toes, bees, apples, church bells, and cottonwoods. I also liked some of the idea odes: desire, hope, courage.

Some of the odes wander a bit far from their target (ode to Santa Fe) but Mora knows what it takes to make a good ode, scrumptious and tactile language. I'm going to give this book away as a gift for my friends in New Mexico and my friends who love the state, but live elsewhere.

A few weeks ago I also read Mora's book Aunt Carmen's Book of Practical Saints which is similar but about ode-like explorations of Catholic saints.

Good Poems for Hard Times." I got this book used and it was one of my bathtub poetry books. I need variety when I'm reading in the bathtub.

Having has so many hard times in New Mexico, I was expecting to like this anthology more than I did. I just don't think Garrison Keillor (the editor) and I have the same rubric for either hard times or good poems.

However, there were enough good poems in here for me to justify keeping this book on hand:

"There Comes the Strangest Moment" by Kate Light
The Carnation Milk poem
"Happiness" by Michael Van Walleghen
"The Rules of Evidence" by Lee Robinson
"Minnesota Thanksgiving" by John Berryman
"High Plains Farming" by William Notter
"In Bed with a Book" by Mona Van Duyn

and some poems that I feel would be very moving at a funeral:

"Dawn Revisited" by Rita Dove
"Crossing the Bar" by Alfred, Lord Tennyson

 The Everyman's Library of Pocket books puts out these little novelty poetry anthologies that I'm always wanting to buy: ghost poems, Irish poems, jazz poems, comic poems, Christmas poems. There's a ton. The only other one I have is Zen Poems which I did not love.  Because I'm working on a novel with a murder in it, an anthology of poems about murder seemed necessary to read. And so I bought Killer Verse, poems of murder and mayhem. Loved it!  Sections are divided between family murders, murder ballads, Vers Noir, the inner-workings of murders, psycho killers, victims and meditations on murder. You get both old and new here, from anonymous ballads to Robert Browning to Marie Howe. 

For years I've loved the segment of The Sonny & Cher Comedy Hour where Sonny & Cher sang called  "Stagger Lee" (famously done by The Grateful Dead) and in this book I came across the poem from which is was based: "Stackalee."

Truthfully, I bought "Yesterday I Saw the Sun" by Ally Sheedy expecting it would be the worst in a bunch of celebrity poets. I was again surprised.

This is actually Ally Sheedy’s second book. When she was a tween, she published a successful children’s book, She Was Nice to Mice. Turns out her mom is a publicist and there's a literary agency in her family, Charlotte Sheedy.

There's also a long list of thank-you’s in the front of the book that includes plenty of brat-pack names from her 1980s-era movie peak.

All that insider stuff aside, this was a pretty raw and interesting book. Sure, there are some cliches employed, including the typical "hanging by a thread," once when we were literally talking about a doll’s eye, later figuratively.

But what Sheedy did well was to capture the gamut of drama in a young teen girl’s life…and not the squeaky-clean kind of teen: all the tears, mysterious love, intense drama of feeling, bulimia, sexuality, loneliness, rehab (that poem even rhymes), imitations, ideals, mother conflict, the murder of a friend, abortion…all the serious teen issues are here.

Talking about friendship with other women in a poem called "A Man’s World" was a  strong moment and the poem "Amends" was clever.

Her search for magical womanliness reminded me of the discussion on Texas Chicana writers in the book  The Desert is No Lady, Chicana writers who have Aztec goddesses at their disposal, a heritage anglo women do not have.

Sheedy also provides snapshots of Hollywood circa the early 1980s, experiences with rock and rollers. Could Paris Hilton have written this at her age. I don’t think so.

Sheedy even rewrites herself. This is a teen's obsession with her coming out into complicated worlds of womanhood and love. And through it, I remembered all my 16/17 year old melodramatic self. This are poems in typical teen languages but what you get is literally a rite of passage in action. I don’t know why we don’t honor this.

After a few years working on this blog, I've seen some patterns emerge in the kinds of poems I have been enjoying:

• The anthologies I've been reading in the bath;
• Poets who tackle race issues;
• Celebrity poetry;
• Archeology poets (I just heard about a new book called Archaeology by Linda Simone);
• Poets who write about pop culture and/or modern technology;

Books I find when traveling by poets who write about the local area, faculty poets; interestingly faculty aren’t always writing about where they’re currently teaching, as my following examples show.

I found the following two books at the University of New Mexico bookstore in Albuquerque.

Echolocations (2000) by Diane Thiel

Considering the surreal, archaeological cover, the stark title, the fact the publisher is Storyline press, and the precious photo on the back cover, I was expecting this book to be 100% saturated with white-privilege. I thought this was going to be a very white book. Well, it is and it isn't. In it's own way, it's as much a book about race as Patricia Smith's book, Shoulda Been Jimi Savannah (2013).

The poems are threaded with German words and phrases and Thiel explores the language's impact on her. Many important lines are in German, not just superfluous drops for atmosphere.

It reminded me of the crucial lines of Spanish in Bless Me, Ultima, (a novel about northern New Mexico I just finished and loved). My copy of Ultima includes no translations of the Spanish and they appeared too often for me to look up constantly). I did go through the effort of decoding the German, however, with the help of Monsieur Big Bang. Later I discovered the translations were available in the back of the book as notes.

Thiel's poems deal with the legacy of her German heritage in fairy tales, her father’s violence, and Holocaust guilt. It is a Storyline book with a Dana Gioia blurb on the back , so I wasn't surprised to find forms in the book. Thiel is actually good at them, her rhymes are unobtrusive and loose. The poem "Changeling" is a light-sounding lyric about World War II that reminded me of W. H. Auden. The books sections are very neat and the book has a very collegiate feel all around.

I read this book directly after Patricia Smith’s book (and I just remembered I have a cousin named Patricia smith). While Smith details her childhood in black Chicago, Thiel's takes place in a very white-seeming Miami. Their childhood experiences are starkly different. At points you really see evidence of white privilege in Thiel's poems, the privilege of not having to consider your race in your day-to-day life. At other times Thiel is very concerned with race and her inheritance as a German which carries its own baggage.

Smith uses very dense and sophisticated language, arguments and connections, all describing an  impoverished urban landscape. Thiel’s poems are very collegiate but constructed more simply.  Smith is less European influenced. Her music is Chicago and American. Both of these poets are very smart, eloquent writers; but the world you see under their capes is amazingly different.  Thiel talks about doing projects about Dante’s Inforno in gifted glass and loving the band Styx. Smith talks about walking to school in the cold city and the lewd cat-calls from the boys. Interestingly, both respond in verse to Barbie dolls.

Thiel has burning secrets Smith doesn’t have, references Ovid's Thisbe and gives us Auden quotes. She writes about the beginning of the unraveling of a relationship in "Florida Turnpike:"

Near our exit, the car drives through a sea
of yellow butterflies crossing the highway.
I look at you to see if you have noticed
how fast we're moving–when the first one hits
the windshield with the impact of a fist.

I enjoyed her poems dealing with the world of poetry, how to avoid men with certain books of poems at their bedsides. Even her garden poems, which you fear might be precious, avoid sentimentality. In "Event Horizons:"

Exposure:

Ask any poet–
you can die from it,
even after eating
your companions.

"History’s Stories" uses a form that repeats the last sound of a line twice before launch into the next line. Does anyone know what this form is? Here's a sample:

For her song and flight, Echo is torn apart,   art
flung limb by singing limb. Each valley swallows,  allows

Another nice surprise were her anthropology poems, the best of which was called "Miami Circle" about believing archaeological finds are part of exotic places instead of things you find in your own backyard.

This reminds me of what I consider my least favorite genre of poems, poetic tourism and it’s intellectual condescension.

There's also a good poem about JFK Jr. called "Legacy."

Destruction Bay (1998) by Linda D. Chavez  sat on the shelf inexplicably in Saran wrap. And I didn't like the book at first, didn't love the what felt like meaningless line breaks, typical of poems from the 1990s.

But soon I found plenty to like about this book:

– We find early evidence of the new angry girl;
– I love the movement of the sections;
– This is a woman’s take on loves dangerous, unflinching violence–even in the tender ones, love is described as snake.
-  Chavez works on poems of place; she contrasts her arctic Alaska with a  tropic vacation in  "Winter Storms," using water imagery and ending with "the luminous bones of whales on the ocean floor." The last poem contrasts her beloved Alaska with her new life in the desert.

In "The Poet Surveys the Wreckage of Her Life" we get a great list poem on non-poetic objects. Chavez's poems are gritty but this is an owned grittiness. Again, I'm always suspicious of poet-tourists who try to write about “the common people."  As the song "The Common People" goes, "Everybody hates a tourist."

Her titles are solid, literally like blocks of ice or thick walls to keep out the cold.

Like Patricia Smith and Diane Thiel, her mother poem(s) are striking. "Of Ivy and a Plum Tree" talks about her mother’s search for love mapped to the idea of tending an impossible garden. Chavez draws out specific emotional moments of relationships. "Rain at the State Line" like Thiel's "Florida Turnpike" marks the moment where a relationship starts to unravel:

They will meet the rain
at the state line, drive into it,
sadness settling on them
like an old coat.

There's a section of Paris poems about her grandmother missed future, the poem "L’Heure Bleue" is about the same ambient light Joan Didion talks about in "Blue Nights." Like Patricia Smith, Chavez deals with re-conceptions of beauty in "The Unveiling of the Paris Collection, 1926," and about being an Alaskan, an Chicana/Mestiza and a woman in dangerous situations. Her poems are full of conflicts of childhood and young adulthood and love's cold violence.

Just when I finish a terrible eBook, I have another great experience with eBooks. After reading about this book in American Poets magazine, I purchased the eBook of Shoulda Been Jimi Savannah (2013) by Patricia Smith.

Can I say, Coffee House Press does a great job with their eBooks. And they price them reasonably under $10.

It's one of the best books I’ve read over the last three years, up there with Natalie Diaz's book, My Brother Was an Aztec. They're both great modern books dealing race.

Smith's book also is full of penetrating family characters and covers the migration of southerners to Chicago, or rather Black Chicago. Interwoven are stories about Motown's artists and Altantic artist Aretha Franklin.

Her very baroque, word-strewn poems come in dense lyrics and include the occasional forms. In some, you could hear the echo of a slam performance. And yes, Smith does have history as a spoken-word performer.

The pieces are tinged with bitterness and topics cover tween growing pains, beauty, body image, race, and culture. Smith's mother poems are particularly memorable as are her pop-culture pieces, culminating in a crown of sonnets about Motown. We find there The Supremes, The Temptations, Smokey Robinson, Little Stevie Wonder, Lady D (Diana Ross), Mary Wells, and The Marvelettes. Later in the crown we confront being starstruck, encountering pop-star hasbeens, the bait and switch of a troubadour's promises, and the very unromantic ends of star crushes.

To read more about Patricia Smith:

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Patricia_Smith_(poet)

http://www.wordwoman.ws/

This New Mexico Museum Press publication of Red Earth, Poems of New Mexico by Alice Corbin Henderson is beautifully produced with an nice essay in the front and a New Mexico painting for every poem in the book.

But I was a little dissappointed. Henderson was writing about New Mexico in the 1920s, after she moved there for health reasons. It's not that the poems are dated, which some of them are. It's that I was hoping for more tactile images from this modernist aficianado, Assitent to Harriet Monroe of Poetry magazine.

The best poem in the book is the epigraph beginning this very slim book of poems (54 pages):

Hear the roar, after the fierce modern music
Of rivets and hammers and trams,
After the shout of the giant
Youthful and brawling and strong
Building the cities of men,
Here is the desert of silence
Blinking and blind in the sun–
An old, old woman who mumbles her beads
And crumbles to stone.

The rest of the book doesn't live up to that.

I haven't been blogging much this summer but I've been doing a lot of reading.

Adventures of Juan Chicaspastas (1985) by Rudolph Anaya

Anaya is famous for writing Bless Me, Ultima, which I am halfway through. This book is a somewhat short mock epic poem. The book (Arte Publico Press) had typos, confusing typos, typos that took me out of the action, which was full of witches, women, swords and switchblades and two brothers who want to be folk heroes. I didn't love it like I'm loving his novel.

The Poets on Poetry series' Poetry, Truth, Autobiography and the Shape of the Self by Carol Muske (before she was Muske-Dukes).

Having lived in LA for eight years and attending many of the fabulously intellectual panels at the Los Angeles Times Book Festival, I would see Carol Muske-Dukes speak often as one of the iconic LA poets. And I loved her memoir, Married to the Icepick Killer: A Poet in Hollywood about poetry in LA and her life with actor David Dukes (you might remember him as Edith's would-be rapist on All in the Family).

This is compilation of some of her book reviews. Muske-Dukes is a second-wave feminist but this book in not an overarching study on women or feminist poetry, although most of the female poets she reviews are second wave feminists.

She has two reviews of Adrienne Rich, she revews the works of Laura Riding, and books by Brenda Hillman, Lynn Emmanuel (including a really good archaeology poem), Maxine Kumin,  Rita Dove, Sandra Cisneros, Carolyn Kizer, Minnie Bruce Pratt, Jane Kenyon, Marilyn Hacker, Patricia Dobler, Maxine Kumin, Elizabeth Spires, Lucille Clifton,  Ellen Bryan Voight,  and Grace Paley. She talks about poets who write fiction, biographies written about women, and spiritual poetry by women.

An excerpt about mistrust of meaning:

 “Ironically, similar perceptions about language among certain French critics and thinkers (all male) led to mistrust of language’s capacity to express anything accurately—leading to “terrorism” in literature, to the “literature of silence,” to Maurice Blanchot’s statement that the goal of language is “its own suppression.”

About the battle between poetry schools:

“The word crisis is, alsas, sorely familiar to the reader of contemporary American poetry. Indeed, the terrain of poetry has been commandeered as one of the battlegrounds upon which literary skirmishes representing larger culture wars are routinely fought. We have weathered a storm of aesthetic/political blitzkrieg: McPoem, neo-formalism vs. free verse, the Death of Poetry, lyric vs.narrative, feminism vs. phallocentrism, The Canon vs. Multiculturalism, the Balkanization of Poetry vs. Eurocentrism, the critic vs. the author, Poetry Slam vs. The Academy, and Harold Bloom vs. Everybody.

Another essay continues along the same vein:

 …the “us and them” of American culture, that is something in us that really does love a wall, a fence, a line drawn in the sand; something anti-intellectual that casts a suspicious eye on the “generalist.”

My friend Ann sent me this book years ago, Ellen Bryant Voigt's The Flexible Lyric. For me, this book was hit and miss. She sets up her essay points very argumentatively. Stephen Dobyns says this so I would say something else. That continual combative set-up made it hard to connect with this writer. I felt that unspoken chip on her shoulder.

But there are many interesting things here:

She talks about having poet idols and about her readings of Elizabeth Bishop and Flannery O’Connor. She disputes the idea of women’s poetry- with a special critique of Alicia Ostriker's Stealing the Language, an argument I was not inclined to follow because Ostriker's book gave me an epiphany about myself as a woman writer (after years of hesitation in believing in such things as women writers).

But I loved her essay making the case for adjectives (in combat with the modernists). Her essay on images was too dense for me and I daydreamed through the one about tone. Some of these essays are really dry. dense and closed. Her essay on the narrative running through Southern writers was good, particularly discussion on Edgar Allan Poe's "The Raven" which reminded me of the reading by Lisa Simpon and James Earl Jones.

She has a 60-page defense of lyric organization vs. using "an arbitrary form" with illuminating examples of Shakespeare and sonnets. She talks about textures of lines and list forms. There's also an essay on Philip Larkin.

In my continued quest to work through books of celebrity poetry, I took on Tarantula (1971) by Bob Dylan. Although I recognize that Bob Dylan is accepted as the only true poet among songwriters, I dreaded reading his poetry, tried of all the Beatles/Dylan hoopla of the last three decades. Although I like The Beatles and Bob Dylan, I'm tired of the hoopla.

However, I have to say (so far), hands down Dylan is the best celebrity poet. I guess this is not surprising since many of his songs stand up as poems, at least this is what poet Billy Collins tells us in the introduction to Dylan's other book of poetry, Hollywood Photo-Rhetoric.

No…Tarantula is good because it's experimental in a way that sometimes produces interesting results, characters and narratives. He does a much smarter playing around than most celebrities do.

And speaking of celebrities, he's as celebrity obsessed as the rest of us. Tarantula is stuffed to the brim with late 1960s celebrity references. I actually created a list. 

Aretha Franklin (many times), Bing Crosby, Edgar Bergen, Suzie Q, Lawrence Welk, Liberace, Valentino, Fats Domino, Minnesota Fats, Grace Kelly, Ernest Tubb, James Cagney, Madonna (but not ours), Janes Russell, Angelina the whore (but not ours), Goldwater versus Johnson, Sammy Snead, Jack London, Charlie Chan, Citizen Kane, Doris Day, Tarzan, Henry Miller, Thomas Edison, James Arness, Shirley Temple, Mae West, Sinatra, Lawrence of Arabia, Steve Jones, Robert Frost, Dostoyevsky, Betsy Ross, John Wayne, Bob Hope, John Huston, Einsein, Buddy Holly, Lee Marvin, Bod Diddley, Jane Mansfield, Lefty Friszzel, Sonny Rollins, John Wilkes Booth, Carl Perkins, Alice Toklas, Woody Guthrie, Kierkegaard, Ed Sullivan, Bob Dylan (indeed), Annette Funicello and Frankie Avalon, Little Richard, CoCo Joe, Prince Rainer, Charles de Gaulle, Agnes Moorhead, Eisenhower, Donald O’connor, John  Lee Hooker, H.G. Wells, Lulu, Jerry Lee  Lewis, Cary Grant, Jackie Gleason, Yogi Bear, Elvis Presley, Ronald Reagan, Bobby Kennedy, Jimmy Hoffa, Joan Crawford, Charlie Chaplin, Sherlock Holmes and Arthur Conan Doyle, e.e. cummings, “some celebrities passing by,” Fernando Lamas, and Phil Silvers.

What I liked about the book was the mass of words (sometimes free associative working into a real story) inter-cut with some very funny verses. Even when he is enigmatic, he is still interesting. There are some very funny sign-offs to the verses, all which are done as unique personas. There are also interesting and irreverent titles, one reusing the term "jingle jangle morning." Some of the prose pieces form and some don't. But there are bits that are prophetic.

From "Seems like a Black Nite Crash"

–it’s every man for
himself—are you a man or a self?

There are some uncomfortable racial usages (similar to in Jim Morrison poems of the same era): references to geisha girl, coon, queers, faggot, and dykes. Yikes! It's hard to tell in these moments if Dylan is critical of those words or using them without irony.

Hollywood Foto-Rhetoric, the lost manuscript (2008) by Bob Dylan, photos by Barry Feinstein.

Bob Dylan must have a messy house because he's always losing manuscripts.

These poems were inspired by photos Feinstein took of Hollywood scenes in the 1960s. There are a scant 23 poems in the book that Dylan hesitates to call poems.

“If they are poems, or if they are not poems…does it really matter?”

The poems have no titles, punctuation, and use some spelling short cuts like using yr for your. The poems overtly about actors are the most interesting.

“you are acting all the time/even when you’re playing you.”

 and

Yes mama, I’m an actor
the difference being my contradiction
that I
do not really wish t be remembered
for my smile
but in compete reversal
as I look around
I realize
that I will be.

The pieces on Judy Garland seem too bullyish and mean-spirited. But there are good conversations between the photos and poems about  stage mothers and a star kid who "memorizes to forget," wax-figured celebrities, sex behind the casting door, the airs of acting classes, movie-star hopefuls, the business of fame and Hollywood's general junky and seedy side.

Starving people
could eat awhile
on what this
nonsense represents

Here's another review in Pop Matters. As a junkie of pop and celebrity culture, I enjoyed both of these books.

If You Want to Write by Brenda Ueland is a book I thought was recommended to me in a recent writing workshop. But I found online various books with similar titles. I read the eBook version of this book at it was terrible, a mess of typos and format confusion, footnotes randomly placed inside of text, very messy, very hard to read. The book was full of overwriting, oversimplification and hypocrisy. Talking about how harmful it is to shut down writers with critiques of their work, followed by chapters of judgements about other writer's works.

But then I found out the book was old, like 1940s-old and that's why I was sensing a 1930s/40s mentality. The big clue was her rhapsody about Eleanor Roosevelt. Everything seemed so dated, especially her cry for women to stop doing housework and start to write. I don't know any modern women who do housework. Even those of us who clean occasionally.

I finally had to skip over the overly-long student examples. This was partly dated-badness; partly eBook badness.

I did enjoy the new novel The Storied Life of A.J. Fikry by Gabrielle Zevin. This was a pleasant story about a small independent book owner and his obsessive love of books. And Fikry is unapologetically judgemental about the books he loves. He's a true snob but you like him even if you disagree with his harsh reviews of books and categories you love (like poetry). So what that the love story between him and the book publisher's publicist feels a little flat. It's just fun to sit in a small bookstore and talk about books for a short time.

There is one line in the book that applies to us directly: Fikry referrers to book jacket blurbs as "the blood diamonds of publishing.” So true.

Finally, the May/June issue of American Poetry Review has a great essay by Greg Wrenn on writing nature poems in a century of environmental destruction.

Mr. Big Bang and I visit quite a few college campuses on our travels and I love to peruse the campus bookstores. I've decided to start buying books of poetry by college faculty as a way to meet new poets.

I started this project on a trip to New Mexico State in Las Cruces, New Mexico. I picked out two books to review.

Hilarity by Patty Seyburn

Seyburn is actually a California poet but she must have been teaching for a while at New Mexico State. Teachers move around.

This is a New Issues poetry book and I didn't like the cover or the binding. Although it was new, pages seemed a bit loose in my copy and the cover design is kind of flat.

But Seyburn is a whip-smart poet with a very fertile vocabulary. From the ars poetica poem, "The Alphabetizer Speaks"

There is such thing as a calling
though I cannot speak for prophets or martyrs…

I do not want the world a certain way.
The world is that way, and I am a vehicle
or the road of nomenclature. I tend the road.

"There is No Escaping the Inedible" was another good ars poetica piece. Of these two poets, Seyburn is the more intellectual and drier although both poets seemed to be inspired by the university atmosphere. For example, one of my favorite poems by Seyburn was "Pop Quiz. Read the full poem here. 

In her own way, she writes about her culture. From "Cassandra in the Suburbs: A Monologue"

My line Jell-O containing cream cheese and mandarin oranges in the Bundt mould emanates like a crop circle; it attracts an repulses. I cannot slice it for fear of repercussions.

She has some creation poems in this book and a set of insomnia poems. The set called "The Emergence of Hilarity" could have been funnier.

 More on Patty Seyburn

She also the co-editor of the LA magazine  POOL: https://www.facebook.com/PoolAJournalOfPoetry

Odalisque in Pieces by Carmen Gimenez Smith

When I first opened this book I felt the first poem was uneven and disjointed but then I was loving these poems by the third one. Both realistic and fantastical, Smith works the border of surreal bleakness.

The father poems are particularly good, "Moonrock" and "How It’s Told." She also takes on cultural inheritance (she says "my kind" a lot) and motherhood.

"Dawn Versified" is a great example of her border writing, which is kind of LANGUAGE-y but feels much more accessible. Her great word combos pull you through.

The book is full of great girl powerness. She struck me as being a writer with  Anne Carson-like verbal bravery. She deals in vagueness but with definite finite edges.

There are a few series of moth poems.  Other good ones, "The Ever" and "Fortune: A Conversation" which ends,

Take this hindsight like a wallet
of cash, exchange it for the local currency, you
endless inversion. You optimist.

She writes amazing end stops. "Eyelash" is very grrrl riot.

…A cavern of aching yen.

I want. I want. I want. It’s got a ring to it. I want the ring.

Her "Solve for N" reminded me of Patty Seburn's "Pop Quiz." You can tell these people have access to classes at a college.

Another good sample from "Why I Left"

Over dinner I asked if he had seen my hairbrush.
Without an answer, he brushed the ghost from my face. 

Smith writes with a meaningless that means something. I also liked the book packaging and poem font.

More on Carmen Gimenez Smith

My friend Ann sent me the book Cooling Time, An American Poetry Vigil by C.D. Wright about 4 or 5 years ago when I still lived in Redondo Beach, California. I couldn’t break into it. I got three pages in and then put it back on the shelf.

Then last fall I took a MOOC on Modern American Poetry and subsequently I read My Emily Dickinson by Susan Howe. Learning to read through the pathways of fragments did the trick and I was able to then re-approach Cooling Time. In fact, I liked it better than My Emily Dickinson. It was more personal, more practical and the fragments and artwork felt more organic to me. Wright reviews poets, talks about the infighting between poetry "schools."

The book is also sprinkled with seemingly random theories about the art of poetry. Her vocabulary is challenging but not impenetrable.

This was one of those small books that took me forever to read because I had to take it slow, but enjoying it all the way. Deep thoughts for advanced poets.

Here is an excerpt about the experimental craft she describes in the work of Erin Mourē:

Punctuating to the max: she ironizes words and phrases with quotation marks, quotes directly; changes point sizes and font styles, shifts back and forth between French and English. Jarringly she capitalizes and de-caps, deploys ampersands, asterisks, footnotes; also numbers and fractions. Then distributes parenthetical remarks throughout as well as actual commentary on the text she is authoring. She anticipates critique and responds to it in advance…the marginalia insist on being key players in the action of the poem…strikes through lines.

The book also veers into publishing. Wright quotes Robert Creeley as surmising, “What is a young poet to do? Form a company.” And she says he means to “start an e-zine or a press, publish yourselves." Quoting Creeley again, “Each has his or her place in the procession.” She keeps coming back to discuss the infighting among poetry schools. I’ll be quoting her more on this topic in an upcoming essay.