Reinventing the Life of a Poet in the Modern World

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Songs and Poems, Redux

MicI guess this will be an evolving conversation. Or maybe this is just a topic I've become entangled with after defending Bob Dylan as a Nobel-Prize-winning poet. It's been my longtime experience that poets and songwriters, neither one, like to talk about the permeable in-between-ness of what they do.

Here are my latest arguments:

  1. The first ancient writings we consider to be poems were either recited or sung. Poetry predates literacy and recitations needed to be mnemonic. They were usually metrical or musical. (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/History_of_poetry)

  2. The word ballad itself points back to poems and songs. There are both musical and poetry ballads, showing their shared history. (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Ballad)
  3. Both songs and many formal poems arrange themselves in stanzas. Another word for stanza, according to poet and poetry historian Edward Hirsch, is stave or staff, which is another connection to music. According to PoetrySchool.com, (OMG, I could get lost on that site): 

    "what we would now understand as lyric poetry can be traced back to a way of performing in which an individual poet would accompany themselves on a lyre while they sang their verses. What we now call the stanza was a group of lines in a set meter whose pattern was repeated, most likely to be sung to the same repeated melody, like the pop lyrics of today."

    Mic drop.

  4. Poetry forms employ more repetitive elements than free verse: rhymes, repeated lines and metrical structures. Forms add constraints. Forms and free verse each have affordances, a set of possibilities and limits to their structures, such as these:

    Forms are easier to memorize.
    Forms are easier to set to music.
    Forms look organized and clean on paper.
    Forms are more predictable.
    Free verse often sounds like it rambles.
    Free verse sounds less sing-song-y and therefore more serious.

    It’s an art of stretching or stuffing whatever structure you choose to work with. Joni Mitchell songs sound more like free verse, (and her lyrics also work as poems, which is why she published them in a big beautiful book that I own, Joni Mitchell, The Complete Poems and Lyrics).

  5. Here's a rubric I like to use: does this lyric rise to the level of fooling anyone who might not know it's a song? If you read an unfamiliar lyric and mistook it for a poem: Booya! It’s hard to test this theory out with music snobs but I did pass off a Bernie Taupin lyric in an anthology of my favorite poems in graduate school, as I did with a Gary Shandling joke that I broke up with line breaks.
  6. There’s a big difference between "You Take My Breath Away" and "Whiter Shade of Pale." Consider this recent example I've been using with my Cher friends, two very different kinds of social-consciousness lyrics:

    Prayers
    The first link is Cher singing some vague generalities in her newest song written by Diane Warren, "Prayers for This World" (2017)

    BackstageThe second link is Cher singing some lyrics of chilling specificity in her version of "Masters of War," written by Bob Dylan (1968).

     

Some songs are just songs and some songs are poetry.

Some will argue that the test above was not a fair contest. And I agree. Because one of these writers is a poet.

I've been talking a lot about Mary Pipher's book, Writing to Change the World. As a therapist, she talks about the difficulties of persuasion and change. In the end of the book she addresses both music and poetry and points out some very interesting differences that are relevant here:

“The auditory circuits that carry music to the brain are proximate to the part of the brain that controls emotions. Music causes both to vibrate, and literally moves us to feelings. Because music burrows so deeply into our psyches, singing adds power and richness to words. Test this theory for yourself by reciting, then singing, 'Glory, Glory, Hallelujah.'

"Music is connected to memory in different ways than speech. Alzheimer’s patients who no longer remember names can still sing songs. People in deep comas often can respond to music. Songs transport us back to our mother’s cradling, our first day of school, making out in our parents’ basements, or our trip to the ocean. Songs carry us back in time to the Civil War, the Irish potato famine, the early days on the Great Plains, the Great Depression, or World War II…

"Music taps into galaxies within us all. And music entrains our rhythms with those of other people, causing us to breath together. Singing together builds community instantly. Singing in harmony literally creates harmony. Pete Seeger said, ‘Singing together you find out that there are things you can learn from each other that you can’t learn from arguments or any other way.’”

Here’s how she describes poetry:

“Poetry has the gossamer quality of a snowflake and the power of a sword….poets write precisely and close to the bone."

Anyway, that's all for now…sure to be continued.

  

Narcissism Today

NarcissimNarcissism is in the news big time right now. It's as if the years of self-absorption have finally come home to roost. It seems like a good time to plug, Writing in the Age of Narcissism again. But first some recent articles on the topic:

Understanding Trump’s narcissism could be the key to opposing him (The Guardian)

Trump is an extreme narcissist, and it only gets worse from here (The Boston Globe)

Donald Trump’s Narcissism Got Him Elected. It Won’t Get Him Impeached. (Fortune)

Narcissists In The Workplace (Psych Central)

Me! Me! Me! Are we living through a narcissism epidemic? (The Guardian)

World events call for a change in attitude. If you're a former gunslinger looking to turn good, this is a place to start:

Writing in the Age of Narcissism

If you’re a poet or writer in any other form or genre, you’ve probably witnessed many modern, uncivilized behaviors from fellow students, writers and academic colleagues—their public relations gestures, their catty reviews and essays, and their often uncivil career moves. Like actors, visual artists and politicians, cut-throat pirate maneuverings have become the new normal. It’s what occurs whenever there are more people practicing an art than any particular economy can support.

The difference with writers is their ability to develop highly conceptualized, rationalizations in order to prove their worth and ideals. This isn’t a new phenomenon, but it has reached a critical mass in meaningless attempts to pull focus in a society obsessed with the show-biz spotlight.

Writing in the Age of Narcissism (72 pages) traces how the narcissism epidemic affects writers, including our gestures of post-modernism and irony, and proposes an alternative way to be a more positive writer, critic and reader.

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Poems About Sex

LipsLast Christmas I received this anthology of erotic poems, Poems to F*ck To, edited by Jason Brain (2015).

Here’s is almost 200 pages of sex poems that are much better than the red-faced, skin-blotched, badly-lit, very unromantic or sexy cover photograph implies.

Another surprise, this book was very professional laid out, (no pun intended), and, in fact, I found zero typos. Zero! This is an amazing feat for a CreateSpace book. And the anthology was lacking the many clichés I was anticipating. Some very creative descriptions and various types of sexuality were represented. There were ars poeticas and many literary references including some to Shakespeare and Georgia O’Keeffe.

These were very present poems, meaning they mostly took place in a present tense. They explored bodies, gender, and even philosophy. There were free verse poems and forms, including a memorable villainelle. Many poems were not only lustful but very wishful thinkings. But some smart poems in here, a few that reminded me of the best of Eric Jong.

I kept track of the authors and the gender breakdown (as far as I could determine):

  • Men: 63
  • Women: 60
  • Ambiguous It’s Pats: 18

The book was pretty evenly represented.

For such a large anthology, curated sections would have been helpful (and pleasurable).

 

Poetry Card Week 9 (US, UK)

Continuing to work through the Poet’s Corner card deck series. I was excited to find two similar photographs for these first two poets. Small thrills.

EdnaMy candle burns at both ends;
It will not last the night;
But ah, my foes, and oh, my friends—
It gives a lovely light!

First Fig” by Edna St. Vincent Millay

This is her most famous poem and it captures the “willful irresponsibility of the time and place" which was "Bohemianism in New York during the 1920s.”

 

Stevie-smith-5What care I if Skies are blue,
If God created Gnat and Gnu,
What care I if good God be
If he be not good to me?

Egocentric” from Stevie Smith

She's writing about narcissism! It's the 21st Century topic! This English poet and novelist was known for her nonsense verse which attempted to work against the pompous or overly serious verse of sense, although providing some "serious underlying messages."

Housman“Terence, this is stupid stuff:
You eat your victuals fast enough;
There can’t be much amiss, ‘tis clear,
To see the rate you drink your beer.
But oh, good Lord, the verse you make,
It gives a cap the belly-ache.”

A.E. Houseman from “Terence, This Is Stupid Stuff”     

This one is a good punctuation lesson. According to the card, Houseman experienced “enormous appeal” for his “idealized rustic vision” and his “insistence that poetry was more physical than intellectual.” He wrote primarily pastoral, rhymed and metered verse which “had a hypnotic quality that led itself to easy memorization.” The character of Terence was a regular and an alter ego in Housman poetry, a disguise for his love of his friend. He started writing after age 40, once the drama of his heartbreak and “emotional life” was over.

Week stats:

1 white American colonialist female
1 black American female
3 white American females
3 white American males
1 white Andalusian male
1 white Austrian male
1 Chilean male
4 white English males
1 white English female
1 white French male
1 white Italian male
1 white Scottish male
1 white Welsh male

1 1300s poet
1 1600s poet
1 1700s poet
6 1800s poets
11 1900s poets

 

Mark Doty Visits Albuquerue and D.H. Lawrence

DotyMark Doty recently visited Albuquerque to give the inaugural speech for a new D.H. Lawrence Ranch (in Taos, NM where he is buried) restoration project. The event was hosted by the University of New Mexico alumni association and was well attended. Turns out Doty is a fan of D.H. Lawrence, (a rare thing among poets lately), had previously stated in a Facebook post that Lawrence's poetry wasn't read nearly enough.

Doty connected him to Walt Whitman and William Blake and praised his directness, intensity, willingness to rage, and admired the time Lawrence allowed to spend studying something, (rather, looking at something), in a poem. Doty stated that ordinary poetry workshops would chop Lawrence up today.

Doty contrasted Lawrence to the most famous modernists of his day, T.S. Eliot whose narrative Doty considered chilly, dry, ashen, containing no blood or juice. Plus, Doty said, Eliot was a cat person. 

DogThis is a good time to plug Mark Doty's "Dog Years." I give that book away as a gift all the time, a book that is both a memoir about his partner's death as it is an ode to dogs. 

Doty said Hart Crane was basically an answer to Eliot's "Wasteland:" as if Crane is responding, "I LIKE cities and bridges, thank you very much!"

Poems Doty read:

Then Doty read some of his own poems that he felt were answering DHL:

When asked if he wrote in forms he said all poems are formal, formal objects with patterns and design.  Someone asked him who his favorite poets were and he named Marie Howe and her book What the Living Do and said her new book coming soon, Magdalene, was very good.

 

Political Poetry

WritingPoetry is on the move! There have been lots of marches, op eds, memes and poems produced over the past four months. Here is a collection of some of what's I've come across or been sent.

Writing Change

First off, I read the book Writing to Change the World by Mary Pipher, a therapist who takes you through the delicate process of changing minds. I found her correlations to the therapist’s couch very helpful. She explains why shaming will never work, why certain types of humor will never work and why even facts don't always make much headway with people who have set ideas. She does offer other alternative techniques.

Poets on the March

The good news is poets are being including as cornerstones in many activist events going on around the country, if not the presidential inauguration.

These following two poets were featured at our local Albuquerque Women's March:

Our local faculty was featured on PBS Newshour with a political poem.

Los Angeles hosted a Writer’s Resist event. Some highlight readings:

Other refreshing resistance in verse and commentary:

To Reject Trump the Perverse, Poets Wage a Battle in Verse (New York Times) My favorite is by Susan McLean from Minnesota.

Trump seethes at what the writers say.
He’ll pull the plug on the N.E.A.
The joke’s on him. Art doesn’t pay.
We write our satires anyway.

Why It Matters That Donald Trump Has No Inaugural Poet (Slate)

If Trump Won't Give Us Inauguration Poetry, Let Us Read Whitman (WBUR)

Read poems from the 7 countries affected by Trump’s immigration ban (PBS Newshour)

Writers use poetry and prose in protest of Trump’s election (The Boston Globe)

Poetry in a Time of Protest (The New Yorker) “Poetry is not a luxury.” Audrey Lorde

Trump’s Inaugural Words Turned Into A Chilling Poem (The Huffington Post)

This Trump supporter's poem has also been making the rounds with snickerings.

Art in the Age of Apocalypse (Tin House)

Movies

NerudaI saw the Neruda movie that is out in independent movie theaters. The movie deals with the political persecution of Neruda and the period when he was in hiding in Chile. Here's a review,  When Poetry and Politics Mix (MSFS).

My favorite quote from this surreal and beautiful movie was the last line, "I was made of paper and now I am made of blood.”

10 Things That Aren’t Writing but Will Help Your Poetry

MandallaSometimes poets need to practice a mindset that is calming and contemplative, sometimes one that is disruptive and mind-altering. There are many ways and modes of thinking, ways to calm over-thinking and ways to shock under-thinking. Practice a few and see if it changes your writing.

 

  1. Expand your reading to new subjects or genres.
  2. Think about words in a new way: as objects, interact with braille, learn about the process of creating books and experimental poetry-reading events.
  3. Work on a garden. Ross Gay talks about poets and gardens
  4. Participate in meditative arts: pottery, needlepoint, weaving, mandala coloring books.
  5. Start Yoga or Tai Chi; think through movement.
  6. Visit some Dharma Talks online or at your local Buddhist center; listen to any kind of re-centering lecture.
  7. Star a community activity, host a party or take a walk in the park where others are walking, volunteer in group activities or meetup projects, spend one of your visits just listening.
  8. Walk a dog. Think like a dog for fifteen minutes. Full on curiosity and enthusiasm!
  9. Cook something very slowly.
  10. Clean your dishes. Figure out how to enjoy cleaning your dishes.

   

A Book of Lovely Mashups

GhostgirlI have a few book reviews that got lost in the shuffle of all the politics last year. This one, Ghost Girl by Amy Gerstler (2004), I picked up at a big book sale in an independent bookstore in Santa Fe. It took me a while to get into because it felt quirky and flat, somehow too translucent to connect with. It’s very possible I was simply learning how to read Amy Gerstler.

By page 18 I had found my sea legs and plenty of poems I liked, including the poem “Fuck You Poem #45” which is a particularly satisfying list poem, (especially considering there might possibly have been 44 previous attempts). The poem “Listen, Listen, Listen” seemed very apropos of our current cultural and political divisiveness. (I wrote that sentence before the election even.) A little sample: “Just the mass of noise and listening to turtles for dear life.” There’s a poem in the voice of the dog called “The New Dog,” which worked better than these poems usually to. There were also poignant poems about death, including “Watch” and “A Widow.”

In the second half of the book, I was checking the title of every poem, my version of a LIKE: “On Wanting to See Ghosts,” “Circus Poster,” “Pastoral Opera Synopsis,” “The Ogre’s Turbulent Adolescence,” (you can figure out the fabulous subjects from these juicy titles). “Domestic” was a great poem about not picking up after someone you love. How great is that?

I loved the full-frontal sexuality of Gersler, (as I did with Amy King). “Ode to Semen” is really good. There are plenty of unrequited love poems here as well. I particularly liked “Swans,” a meditation ending with the line, “These trees can neither run/nor trudge, yet they flower and flower.” “Denial” is great in this vein too, ending with “I write/a poem entitled ‘The History of English Lettuces,’/This isn’t it.”

“Poem That Spills Off the Page” is a list of random answers without questions that actually ends abruptly off the edge of the page in a really satisfying way. These are juxtaposition experiments here too that I like because they have something more connective in them beyond free-association thinking, which feels a bit threadbare at this point. 

I look forward to checking out more of Gerstler.

 

Poetry Card Week 8 (Germany, US, UK)

RilkeContinuing in 2017 to work through the Poet’s Corner card deck.

Who, if I cried out, would hear me among the angels’
hierarchies? And even if one of them pressed me
suddenly against his heart: I would be consumed
in that overwhelming existence. For beauty is nothing
but the beginning of terror, which we still are just able to endure,
and we are so awed because it serenely disdains
to annihilate us. Every angel is terrifying.

“The First Elegy” from The Duino Elegies (1923), Rainer Maria Rilke, translated by Stephen Mitchell

The elegies are named for Duino Castle on the Adriatic Sea. The card didn’t have much else about Rilke. Sad face.

PatchenYes, I went to the city,
And there I did bitterly cry,
Men out of touch with the earth,
And with never a glance at the sky.
Oh, can’t hold the han’ of my love!
Can’t hold her pure little han’!

From “I Went to the City” by Kenneth Patchen.

Patchen was a poet and a painter. His idol was William Blake. He created many painted poems which he called “anticalligraphy” which were sometimes accompanied by jazz musicians.

LewiscarrolAnd through the tremble of a sigh
May tremble through the story.
For “happy summer days” gone by,
And vanish’d summer glory—
It shall not touch, with breath of bale,
The pleasance of our fairy-tale.

From Lewis Caroll’s “Through the Looking Glass” preamble.

Carroll "wrote children’s literature that adults liked," much of it was poetry and puzzles. He was fond of “clever young girls” in the vein of Alice in Wonderland.

Week eight stats:

1 white American colonialist female
1 black American female
2 white American females
3 white American males
1 white Andalusian male
1 white Austrian male
1 Chilean male
3 white English males
1 white French male
1 white Italian male
1 white Scottish male
1 white Welsh male

1 1300s poet
1 1600s poet
1 1700s poet
6 1800s poets
8 1900s poets

Poet Thomas Lux Has Died

LuxscanOne should always honor one's teachers, preferably before they pass away. You don't always make it.

I was fortunate to begin my undergraduate and graduate poetry workshops with two very strong poetry teachers in St. Louis, Missouri. Howard Schwartz was a master at teaching mechanics. In class we often debated poems word by word, even down to the advantages of using 'and' or 'the.' Steve Shreiner taught about feeling and persuasiveness and encouraged us to read other poets. I also had a big crush on him, which I vowed never to let happen again. And Steve Schreiner introduced me to the poet Tom Lux at a local reading Lux was giving. I never would have ended up at Sarah Lawrence College had I not heard those Tom Lux poems back then. They were funny and I wanted a teacher who was funny. Although I had some good classes with Jean Valentine, David Rivard and Joan Larkin, Tom Lux was the professor who sent me to Sarah Lawrence.

Thomas Lux passed away last week from cancer and many of his students have been posting tributes and commentary about what an important mentor he was to them, what an inspiring teacher and friend. In the mid 1990s, Lux was my "don" (or dedicated advisor) at Sarah Lawrence and I took two of his classes, a craft class and a workshop class. Lux had a larger-than-life presence. He was charismatic. His voice boomed during readings. He seemed comfortable in his own skin. He was the celebrity of the writing program. My friend and I called him poetry’s Daryl Hall. We loved to hear him recite the Refrigerator poem and we'd imitate lines of it to each other the way Tom read it: "because you do not eat / that which rips your heart with joy!"

And herein lies the rub for me because I've always had a hard time with celebrities. They walk around with such an impenetrable veneer, it makes one feel smaller. Tom's office at Sarah Lawrence was set up that way, too. It was a beautiful office, especially by the looks of the dives my other professors inhabited (basements were common). It was large and multi-textured, intellectual and full of stuff like Lux had lived a pirate's life. I scanned the New York Times photograph to the top left from a photocopy just to illustrate the scene: Tom in a large chair, his imposing shoulders and head towering over you as you sat uncomfortably in the lower chair. To be uncomfortable is a choice to be sure. But there it was.

I had a big blow up with Lux in that office. The fight wasn't even over poetry. It was over standards of behavior. He called me petty and another word which I can’t remember and can't believe now that I can’t remember as it was so upsetting to me at the time and I've carried that phrase around, ("petty and something"), like a big memorial gravestone all these years since. My eyes opened wide and I stood up to leave his office dramatically. He stopped me and we dialed the whole thing back into civility. He walked me from his office to Slonim Hall.  After that I knew I would never be one of his favorites.

But he told me my poems were brilliant, (whether they were or not), and he took the time to tell my family at graduation that I was a good poet, (I don't think they believed him), and the first time I ever had greens was as a party for the students up in his NYC apartment. He was like my difficult relative or the antagonistic mentor, the best kind of mentor probably, something you must push up against until it's gone. Despite the fact that I don't have the same connection to Tom Lux that other students had, despite all the drama at Sarah Lawrence, I've always been proud to have been one of his many doe-eyed students.

TomtreesThe obits

Thomas Lux, esteemed Georgia Tech teacher and poet (The Atlanta0-Journal Constitution)

Campus, Atlanta communities mourn the loss of Thomas Lux, director of Poetry@TECH (Georgia Tech)

Rest in Peace, Thomas Lux (1946–2017) (Poetry Foundation)

Sarah Lawrence College Mourns the Loss of Longtime Writing Faculty Member Tom Lux (Sarah Lawrence College)

Thomas Lux, 70, poet known for his generosity as a writer, teacher (The Boston Globe)

Renowned poet Thomas Lux, an Easthampton native, dies at 70 (MASS Live)

Remembering Thomas Lux (Technique)

Remembering a One-of-a-Kind Poet (The Atlantic)

The Old New York Times piece from which the photo above came: If Poetry Is Puzzling Who is to Blame?

  

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