Month: February 2013

A Book of Forms: The Optimist by Joshua Mehigan, 2004

I've had a copy of this book  for years. Bought one after hearing Mehigan read at the Los Angeles Times Festival of Books almost ten years ago. Mehigan's poems are primarily formal poems with rhymes. They're more narrative than confessional. I liked this about the book. Although I never felt I got to know Mehigan in a thread through all the poems, the narratives created unique characters. Unfortunately, formal poems sometimes just don't gel properly. Striving to meet the demands of the form, the resulting lines suffer from vagueness. And although most of his poems exhibit impressive technical skill, the poems often lack passion.  A good sample of vagueness can be seen in this couplet from "If Ye Find My Beloved…"

"He touched his wife's stiff arm and eyed her back
the way a child confronts an almanac."

There were poems I liked. In "Past Bedtime" the playful rhymes serve the children's point of view with whimsy.  I enjoyed the sonnet "The Tyrant" which read almost like form perfected. In the poems "Progress" and "The Story of the Week" we see vagueness actually serving the pieces. And the title poem is fascinating on each re-read. Mehigan has a strong command of his forms, complex sentence arrangements and unique narratives; I would just prefer his poems be less studied.

A Book About Life as a Woman; She Be by Tina Pisco, 2010

Tina Pisco is another poet in command of her rhythms, sentence structures and building dramatic movement within her poems. I was intrigued by her book's section titles: Woman, Lover, Thinker, Writer, all which create a kind of mathematical equation out of "She be woman, she be lover, she be thinker…" I also liked coming across Irishisms in her poems like Y-front (instead of V-neck) and smallies (for kiddies). Pisco has a sure sense of purpose about each poem as well. She always gets somewhere.

"Photograph" starts the book out strong and is one of the best poems in the set. I loved the experimental "DOGFOODCATFOOD" and the grrl power in "Contradictory Expectations." I also enjoyed the musical momentum of "Artists' Exemption."

What I would like to see more in her next book of poems is more specificity of word choice (show v. tell).  I was missing the juicy exacting word in many places. In revisions, she could improve upon the generalities of phrases like "take me in your arms," "bed of roses," "lived and loved hard," "with the best of them." These types of cliches also hampered my reading of her characters in these poems. Her husband comes across as simply the generic husband. I had no sense of who he was with any specificity (body or heart).

For instance, there are meaty phrases in this poem "From St. Andrews to the St. Alixe"

The watchfulness/of shoes….
…through towns where Weather is a citizen…
…store my words in salt.

Here the specificity is really percolating. The final poem, "For Sharon" is another great example of beautiful particularity.

It's in the silence
between the crow's caw
and the wind's rush

It's in the stillness
between the last heartbeat
and the next breath

that the poet
find the

poem.

   
A Book About Boxing: Apocalyptic Swing by Garrielle Calvocoressi, 2009

This is another book I picked up at the Los Angeles Times Festival of Books years ago after hearing Calvorcoressi read on a panel. I like this book: it's gritty, brash, sinewy, concise–just like a boxer. It was a hard one, however, to get into due to some enigmatic and complicated opening poems. But I was drawn in by the sixth or seventh poem.

One theme of the book is salvation. There's a small-town-Americana gothic suffering to an array of religious poems. The best ones are "Jerusalem Baptist Church" (with pressing incantations of I have seen/I have heard/I have counted), "The Chapel, Now Quite Open to God," "Epistle From Her Daughter Yet to Be Consummated Back East," "Prayer After a Long Time Away" ("All those saints/calling to me from the bars"), and "Rosary Catholic Church" ("This is just one day of suffering").

Calvocoressi explores sexuality and salvation unflinchingly in poems like "Elegy Scale" and explores stark sexual imagery and control in poems like "Pleasant Plan Missionary"with lines like:

"Fill her up with so much fire
even Jesus will have to look away."

Violence and religion come together in the poem "Every Person in This Town Loves Football" which  begins with the line "Even the nuns come out," weaving sexuality in with

"Who's your daddy?

If he lived in this town he played
the game too and every girl
held his name in her mouth…

He walked down the halls
smelling of Old Spice and chew.
Who could break a boy like that?"

With that final line, you're not sure if Calvocoressi is calling for sympathy or vengeance.

Most of the poems are set in gothic rural settings but "LA Woman" is an interesting exception. There are other interesting odds and ends. "Fence" is a great mournful poem about the death of Matthew Shepard.  "Late Twentieth Century in the Form of a Litany" is also an excellently delirious pop-culture rant.

As interesting as the sexual-religious poems
are, the heart of the book lies with the boxing poems which expertly
explore boxing truths and the redemptive qualities of violence. "Glass
Jaw Sonnet," although not boxing-specific, preludes to a taunting anger.
"Boxers in the Key of M" introduces these boxing poems with lines like, "Have
you/ever gotten hit or thrown against a wall?/ There's a sweetness to
it, that moment when/your God would forgive you anything."

In the poem
"At Last the New Arriving," it is the glory of fighting:

"It will leave
you stunned
as a fighter with his eyes swelled shut
who's told he won
the whole damn prize…

O it will be beautiful.
Every girl will ask you
to dance and the boys
won't kill you for it. Shake your head.
Dance
until your bones clatter. What a prize
you are. You lucky sack of
stars."

"Training Camp: Deer Lake, PA" is a great long poem. In part iv, the boxer believes he's losing his girl
to another man: "take a thousand
punches in the gut./Your heart is a field with a thousand gulls/upon
it. Let them settle as you work the bag,/as he puts his clothes in your
drawers,/as she changes the locks and forwards your mail."

The poem "Box Fugue" ends with the lines "We are all so beautiful/with our face against the mat."
"Blues for Ruby Goldstein" is another great poem about the weakling boxer:

"In the gym or
the
ring all you gotta do is get up
one more time that the other guy thinks
you can.

In these poems, boxing is religion, sexuality and redemption.

…who's gonna
say, 'Stop.' They don't want to. That's the
truth."

I was disappointed with this book. Although it gives a good overview of Shaw's political activities and influences, and a thorough timeline of his sex-capades, the books and plays seem to pop up out of nowhere with no explication of his craft although the biographer does deal with political and social themes in his plays at length.Don't come here for any insight into Shaw's writing technique.

And politically, Shaw is a mixed bag. Although Shaw spent time as a Mussolini and Hitler apologist at the beginning of World War II, before all the mass killings, he did come to his senses before the end…but mostly because he was not an anti-semite. He didn't seem to be against fascism itself. A lifelong socialist, he also became mislead by Stalin. Dictators seemed to be his achilles heel.

That said, he had some interesting things to say about democracy and the ills of capitalism. In his will, he also called for a new English phonetic alphabet that didn't come immediately to fruition, but since come to exist through the use of shortened text messaging phrases like "I luv u" and "Wd u plz."

And early on he had a refreshing life view. The Shavian credo:

"This is the true joy in life, the being used for a purpose recognized by yourself as a mighty one; the being thoroughly worn out before you are thrown on the scrap heap; and being a force of Nature instead of a feverish selfish little cod of ailments and grievances complaining that the world will not devote itself to making you happy."

The author A.M Gibbs also provides a list of works by writers who dealt with the theme of apocalypse due to the new horrors of World War I:

• 1916, D.H. Lawrence, Woman in Love
• 1916-17, George Bernard Shaw, Heartbreak House
• 1919, William Butler Yeats, The Second Coming
• 1922, T.S. Eliot, The Waste Land

Who couldn't use some apocalyptic reading about now?

For years I've had this W. H. Auden compliation and never opened it. Two weeks ago, I grabbed it for some humor, expert rhymes and musical lines. Auden is one of the first poets I became familiar with, assigned to report on him in my very first poetry class in high school. I did a short study of the two perinnials: "The Unknown Citizen" and "O Tell Me the Truth About Love." I was reminded of him again when "Funeral Blues" came up in Joan Dideon's recent book Blue Nights.

What I enjoyed about reading Auden this time were his takes on other writers and pop culture, all the times he dropped in celebrity names.  My least favorite poems were the love poems with the exceptions of "What's in Your Mind, My Dove, My Coney" and "Song" that begins with "You were a great Cunarder, I/Was only a fishing smack."

Celebrity culture is dealt with in "Who's Who" and he often references the famous: Mae West, Fred Astaire, John Gielgud, and Valentino in between his thoughts on war and Quantum Theory. "Imagine what the Duke of Ellington/Would say about the music of Duke Ellington." (from "Letter to Lord Byron")

There are always lovely rhythms in his lines. From "Foxtrot from a Play:"

"The soldier loves his rifle,
The scholar loves his books,
The farmer loves his horses,
The film star loves her looks…

And this refrain in the poem:

"Some lose their rest for gay Mae West,
But you're my cup of tea…

Some like a tough to treat 'em rough,
But you're my cup of tea…

And some I know have got B.O.
But you're my cup of tea…

Ending on:

And dogs love most an old lamp-post,
But you're my cup of tea.

I enjoyed wading through his long epic "Letter to Lord Byron" to see how he handled the extended celebrity poem. In the poem he mentions Gary Cooper, Jane Austin, Crawford and 'Mr. Yates' among others.

I loved how he takes the piss out of advertising in "Ode" going deep into the selling and being-sold-to psyche: 

"Though I know that the Self's an illusion,
And that words leave us all in the dark,
That we're all serious mental cases
If we think that we think that we know."

"The Truest Poetry is the Most Feigning" is a great discussion of the politics of word choice. More on writers ("the snivelling sonneteer") and healers:

"The friends of the born nurse
are always getting worse."
–"Shorts"

"Every brilliant doctor
Hides a murderer."
–"Many Happy Returns"

"The average poet by comparison
Is unobservant, immature, and lazy.
You must admit, when all is said and done,
His sense of other people's very hazy,
His moral judgements are too often crazy,
A slick and easy genereralisation
Appeals too well to his imagination."
–"Letter to Lord Byron"

"It may be D.H. Lawrence hocus-pocus,
But I prefer a room that's got a focus."
–"Letter to Lord Byron"

"Joyces are firm and there there's nothing new,
Eliots have heardened  just a point or two.
Hopkins are brisk, thanks to some recent boosts.
There's been some further weakening in Prousts.

I'm saying this to tell you who's the rage,
And not to loose a sneer from my interior.
Because there's snobbery in every age,
Because some names are loved by the superior,
It does not follow that they're the least inferior…
–"Letter to Lord Byron"

There were also many more references to sex and the dramas of sex than I expected. Auden is very saucy.

"When Laura lay on her ledger side
And nicely threw her north cheek up,
How pleasing the plight of her promising grove
And how rich the random I reached with a rise."
–"Three Songs from The Age of Anxiety"

But he was a curmudgeon in the end. From "Doggerel by a Senior Citizen:"

"The Speech was mannerly, an Art,
Like learning not to belch or fart:
I cannot settle which is worse,
The Anti-Novel or Free Verse."

Ah…those crazy gadgets kids are into: free verse poems!